Me again, this summary it’s about a tiny book named «Dreams of freedom», was created by me and Valentina again ❤
Castillo, D in her book “Dreams of freedom” tell us the story of a young Jew girl named Emma, who lived in the middle of the world war II, in Germany with her mom. She used to dream with get back to her childhood city, Jerusalem, were she had been really happy. To do not forget that happiness, Emma had a photo album of that city that she was always carrying with her. However, one day that she was going to the school, she was captured and taken to the concentration camps. There she met her best friend, Annette, a curvy pretty redhead who was two years younger than Emma. Also his lover Oswald, a police man with a lanky appearance. With them, she planned an escaping plan to be free and able to see her mom again. When they were almost finishing they escape Emma realized that she forgot her photo album, so she decided go and get it. But, she was surprised by a soldier and he decided to show the other prisoners what happens if they didn’t follow the rules. For that reason, he killed Emma in front of the whole camp.
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The structure of your summary is correct
You metioned the author
You also wrote the context the place in which the story took place.
instead of saying
«Who lived in the middle», you could say «who lived through the world war II»
«She used to dream with get back to her childhood city», you could say: «She used to dream of getting back to her childhood city»
«one day that she was going to the school», you could say «one day that she was going to school»
«what happens if they didn’t follow the rules», you could say «what could happen if they don’t follow the rules
Remember is not always necessary to use the demonstrative «that». You’re using it way too much!
That’s all!
Take care and drink water ❤
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“one day, she was going to school” ****
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