First draf of introductive paragraph.

The benefits of computer games.

My cousin is a huge video game fan, such as, that he invested big part of his earnest to get a proper computer, keyboard, headphones and speakers. However, my aunt usually criticizes him because she thinks he doesn’t do anything productive with his life. Most of her arguments focus on saying that he will not achieve a proper social life locked up playing. Also, that his games bring nothing to his learning process. Nevertheless, my cousin doesn’t fulfil any of those ideas she. On the contrary, in his online game he has another type of interactions every day. He has game friends and also, he goes out often with them and his college friends. In addition, playing computer games he learnt a fluid English level and the basics of French. For all these reasons computers games actually provides social and languages skills. Which are positive factors that gives to their benefits that they can apply to real situations.